Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others say that economic growth is damaging the enviroement so it must be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Dear Sir, My friends and I had

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dinner at your restaurant on

last

sunday

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. I am writing

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letter to you complain about the

food

and service. The

frist

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first

problem was that

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The staff of the

restaurent

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restaurant

were behave

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bad and rude. The service of the

food

was very slow and they did not serve the

food

with good manners. The waiter who delivered the soup to my friend had his thumb on it. Another waiter

supilt

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spilt

split

some curry on my friend's lap and did not care to apologize.

Finally

, your

restaurent

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restaurant

has

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good reputation in the city, but I

was not impress

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by the

food

. The

food

was mediocre. The corn soup was very sour. The vegetable was overcooked and the dessert was not fresh. The

food

was not good for the price.

Also

, I think some of the

food

was bad and not fresh because two of my friends and I

stomachacha

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stomachache

the day after. I expect you to refund the cost of our meal. A copy of the bill is attached here.

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1Word repetition
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11Grammar mistakes
 

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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Relevant & specific examples

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Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others say that economic growth is damaging the enviroement so it must be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

In some countries, celebrities complain about the way the media publicize their private lives. Some people say that they should accept it as part of their fame. Do you agree?

Countries should restrict foreign companies from opening offices and factories in order to protect local businesses. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

Many people in poor countries die from diseases that are curable because they cannot afford the medication required. Do you believe that drug companies should make their products available at reduced prices in these countries?