Countries should restrict foreign companies from opening offices and factories in order to protect local businesses. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.
It is a fact that domestic
companies
are getting business hit due to
entry of foreign entities, hence
there are a lot of people who may argue that government
should Correct article usage
the government
banned
these entries. Change the verb form
ban
This
essay will outline the reasons why I completely disagree with the notion, as these outside companies
come up with latest
technology for Change the article
the latest
cost effectiveness
, as well Add a hyphen
cost-effectiveness
ass
it really helps in Correct your spelling
as
maintain
a healthy competitive environment.
Change the verb form
maintaining
Firstly
, worldwide leading organizations are operating with efficient technologies and upgraded versions of it. Efficient delivery of product
with Fix the agreement mistake
products
economic
of scale can be seen Replace the word
economies
as a result
of that. For example
, cost
of production and delivery of electronic products by multinational Correct article usage
the cost
companies
are
far better than domestic manufacturing units in Wrong verb form
has been
past
decade. Add an article
the past
Therefore
, opening doors for these companies
could be seen as really add
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adding
values
to local consumers.
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value
Secondly
, a sound market get
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gets
judge
by Wrong verb form
judged
it's
Correct your spelling
its
cometitiveness
, and there should be Correct your spelling
competitiveness
less restriction
.Fix the agreement mistake
fewer restrictions
This
is really important from Add an article
a customer
the customer
customer
point of view as they should be allowed to choose Change noun form
customer's
their
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them
require
product Change the form of the verb
required
with
Change preposition
at
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a comparitive
comparitive
rate, whilst consumer power is less in Correct your spelling
competitive
comparative
absence
of it. Correct article usage
the absence
For instance
, Middle East countries have strong monopoly business structure due to
which people has
no choice but Change the verb form
have
buy
the product Fix the infinitive
to buy
which
that Correct pronoun usage
apply
provider
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the provider
offer
. These factors must be taken into consideration when thinking Change the verb form
offers
to disallow
outsidersChange preposition
about disallowing
,
because they bring Remove the comma
apply
much needed
Add a hyphen
much-needed
choice
for buyers with them.
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choices
To conclude
, although
there have
been Change the verb form
has
demand
Add an article
a demand
the demand
of
banning outside business with consideration of Change preposition
for
closure
of Correct article usage
the closure
few
local shops and factories, I disagree with Correct article usage
a few
this
action. It's because not only it makes
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make
positive
impact on Add an article
a positive
lower cost
offering to local customers but Add a hyphen
lower-cost
also
provide an alternate option in markets where single
company holds it.Add an article
the single
a single
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