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Smacking children to is the best method to discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The supplied table compares that how many ratios of earnings
adults
 and
adolescent
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adolescents
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 expand
for given
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 consumer items in the UK in 1998. Overall, it is obvious that, while children expanded for music at most, they
inclined
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 to buy
food
 at least.
The
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 negligible amount of money was spent on videos by
adults
, at the same time they especially women allocated
larger
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 part of their money for
food
. With regard to the amount of outlays,
adults
 spent one-fourth of their income on
food
, particularly women had a tendency to buy
food
, expending 39%. As opposed to
this
 trend, expenses of female buyers for
electronical
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electronic
 devices and videos accounted for a mere 1% and 0.5% of their revenues. A category of music cost 5% or both gender.
On the other hand
, British children’s outlays for music items were 4 times higher than for
food
, respectively 39% and 10%.
Although
 the children’s figure related to electronic equipment was 23%, girls allocated only 5% of their earnings for
this
 category. Money spent by
adolescent
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for
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 videos was higher than
adults
, involving 12% .
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