Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: ● Say why you would like to go on the trip ● Suggest what you could do to help during the trip ● Ask other questions about the trip
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Shiva Prasad, father of Devansh, who was studying in the 4th class in your school. I came to know that a school trip is planned to abroad for 3 days. I am writing
this
letter to inform my willingness in attending
the camp Change preposition
to attend
in
overseas.
These days, Change preposition
apply
due to
the heavy work
lord I feel Correct your spelling
workload
myself
exhausted, so I am inclined towards the programme Correct pronoun usage
apply
inorder
to unwind, and spend Correct your spelling
in order
ample
amount of time with my children.
As Correct article usage
an ample
the
I work for a travel company in Correct article usage
apply
visakhapatnam
, Change the capitalization
Visakhapatnam
in
addition
I have been to Srilanka Add the comma(s)
addition,
for
2 times. Change preposition
apply
Therefore
, I Could aid you in
the accommodation required during the period Change preposition
with
Furthermore
, I have friend
working for a missionary school in that country. we could request him to arrange a travel bus for us.
May I know the date of return, so that I can apply for leaveAdd an article
a friend
.
Change the punctuation
?
Furthermore
can we bring our relatives asking with us for the trip?
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
ShivaAdd a comma
Furthermore,
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task response
Make sure to address all parts of the question fully and appropriately
coherence and cohesion
Organize your ideas in a more coherent and cohesive manner, with clear paragraphing and appropriate use of linking words
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite