some people believe that the government should only pay attention to country's economic development while others believe that they should pay equal attention to all the sectors. Discuss both the views.
The importance of economic
progress
which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people
deem
that it is Wrong verb form
deeming
important
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an important
part
of country
while Add an article
the country
other
believe that Correct pronoun usage
others
goverment
should develop Correct your spelling
government
other type
of Change the wording
another type
other types
progress
which is equally important for better nations
. This
essay will further
elaborate both
Change preposition
on both
positive
and negative of Correct article usage
the positive
this
trend and give my opinion.
There are myraid
reasons why economic growth is important for a nation but the Correct your spelling
myriad
first
and foremost cause is better economic gives many things as employeement
, development, respect and most important fact is that their Correct your spelling
employment
people
live better
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a better
life
. Good economic attracted Replace the word
lives
multi national
company and they generated Correct your spelling
multinational
employeement
, Correct your spelling
employment
that is
why their citizens have jobs and they earn enough money. Well
developed Add the punctuation
,Well
economic
has one path for Replace the word
economy
a
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nations
a nation
nations
to develop many sectors and made
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make
easy
way for living life which is important for their Add an article
an easy
people
. Developing economic
is a gateway of Replace the word
economy
nation
to become more advanced.
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the nation
a nation
However
, there are some nagate
of Correct your spelling
negative
this
trend due to some people
deem that other
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another
sector
of development is unimportant part
like health sector
, education sector
and others. Education sector
which
is important for Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
because educated people
also
build nations
it is main
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the main
a main
part
of country
. Add an article
the country
Country
which is one type of building those sectors are blocks of Add an article
A country
The country
this
building when those blocks would well developed
that means building is automatically strong and developed. Change the verb form
be developed
That is
why many people
favour this
view.
To conclude, according to the argument one can reach conclusion
is that economic Correct article usage
the conclusion
progress
is important but in my opinion, other
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another
part
of progress
is equally significant of become
good Change the verb form
becoming
nations
. We can not ignore this
development.Submitted by mp960021 on
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