we cannot help everyone in the world that needs helps, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The writer’s view, there is a hot debate over helping to the everybody that needs it to run the universe.
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, the priority in each society should attend their situation.
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, I
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disagree with the idea that either governments or peoples should help them at any price. In the same way, there are different approach, like supportive and charity international and regional institution.
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of all, there are different ways that do not necessarily need government or persons for helping to the people who are needing it.
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, should they tend to help the other people, they would help to them by own expense.
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, for
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case, international and regional institutions and organization were created by a group of countries.
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, the red cross or red crescent has helped the people who hand to mouth in the run the vale.
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, the people have suffered from war or natural disasters.
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, these institutions can boost the deprived people better than others.
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of all, it is clearly fanciful that we can help all the needy people in the run the cosmos.
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, every country or each one faces a lot of problems, and in most those the issues of deficit the budget is an important obstacle to aim for giving opportunities to people for a better life with more amenities. Should the governments or each person helps to other people in the macrocosm, it would be hard to attend their people or their life.
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, there are many poorer or less developed countries like some African countries.
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, it could be causing problems
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as expand destitute, jobless and so on. In conclusion, as I have noted above, I believe that the useful initiative in supporting the needy people, is using international and regional supportive institution.
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, it would be wrong to use governmental aids in the way. Only in
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way could have been supporting to survive the divested people
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global interconnectivity
  • international cooperation
  • ethics
  • moral obligation
  • geographical borders
  • diplomatic relations
  • economic stability
  • global security
  • resource allocation
  • expertise
  • international aid
  • dependency and development
  • sustainable solutions
  • local and global initiatives
  • community resilience
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