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Some people think it is better for children to grown up in the city, while others think that life in the countryside is more suitable for them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both places?

#people #children #city #life #countryside #places
SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT ITS IS GOOD FOR CHILDREN TO GROW IN RURAL AREA ON OTHER SIDE SOME CONSIDER URBAN
LIFE
 IS BETTER FOR PROPER DEVELOPMENT OF CHILDRENS
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THERE ARE MORE ADVANTAGES OF RURAL
LIFE
 FOR GOOD BROUGHT UP OF CHILDRENS.I WILL EXPLAIN BOTH ASPECTS IN MY ESSAY.
FIRST
 I WILL EXPLAIN WHY ADVANTAGES OF CITY
LIFE
 ARE MORE. CITIES ARE
GOOD PLACE
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A GOOD PLACE
 TO LIVE IN TERMS OF HEALTH
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EDUCATION AND OTHER RECREATIONAL ACTIVITIES.
LIFE
 IS VERY
ADVANCE
 AND FULL OF OPPORTUNITIES FOR CHILDRENS.EDUCATION SYSTEM IN SCHOOLS IS VERY
ADVANCE
 AND BASED ON PRACTICAL APPROACH LIKE WELL EQUIPPED LABS AND LIBRARIES.OTHER THAN STUDIES THEY
ALSO
 INVOLVE IN EXTRA CARICULLAR ACTIVITIES LIKE SWIMMING
,
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BOXING
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PAINTING
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CILDRENS Have MORE CHANCE TO PARTICIPATE IN VARIOUS COMPTETIONS.IN CITIES SCHOOLS HAVE MENTORS TO GUIDE CHILDREN FOR THEIR FUTURE.
HOWEVER
 PEOPLE IN CITIES FACE ONE MAJOR PROBLEM AND
THAT IS
 POLLUTION.IN
ADVANCE
 INDUSTRAIL CHILDREN OFTENLY FACE ISSUES RELATED TO BREATHING AND VARIOUS ALLERGIES.CILDREN ARE MORE ENGAGE ON MOBILES AND SPEND LESS QUALITY TIME WITH FAIMLY. ON OTHER HAND URBAN
LIFE
 IS
PEACFUL
Suggestion
A PEACFUL
 WITH LESS POLLUTION.CHILDREN BECOME MORE CLOSE TO
NATURE BUT
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NATURE, BUT
 STILL THEY FACE PROBLEM OF POOR EDUCATIONAL SYSTEM.EVEN HEALTH FACILITIES ARE NOT AVIABLE
LAST
 ONE 3 CHILDREN DIED DUE TO WRONG DOSE OF INJECTION BY UN EXPERIENCED DOCTOR
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OTHER THAN
THIS
 URBAN AREAS HAVE LESS OPPORTUNITIES FOR
BETTER FUTURE
Suggestion
A BETTER FUTURE
. IN THE END I CONCLUDE MY ESSAY ON THE POINT CITIES ARE MORE DEVELOPED AND
ADVANCE
 AND INSPIRE CHILDRENS IN MANY WAYS.THERE IS MORE COMPTETION IN CITIES FOR SURVIVAL AND EVERYONE GIVE THEIR BEST TO ENTER IN THAT RACE. IN THE END I CONCLUDE MY ESSAY ON THE POINT CITIES ARE MORE DEVELOPED AND
ADVANCE
 AND INSPIRE CHILDRENS IN MANY WAYS.THERE IS MORE COMPTETION IN CITIES FOR SURVIVAL AND EVERYONE GIVE THEIR BEST TO ENTER IN THAT RACE.
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