Eating too much sugar is harmful for health. Some people think that it is government responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption while others think that it is individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views

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Dear Mr. Smith, I

am Kritesh

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am creating

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am created

have created

Patel father of Krishna who is studying in your class 7-A

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Accept space

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Roll No. 32). I am writing

this

letter to enquire about an upcoming school trip to New York

month.

To begin

with, I have a few questions about the trip.

First

, what is the main purpose of

this

visit? I am expecting to have some learning experience to students who are participating in

this

tour.

Furthermore

, How many days will you stay at each location?

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I have few friends in the city who would like to meet her in the free time and would you allow

this

? As you are aware that Krishna is a special child, and she needs to follow the strict

food

diet to maintain her health.

Although

she is willing to eat the

food

made by the school's chef, she is allergic to

food

such

as nuts and kiwi. If you do not mind,

then

I would like her to carry some homemade

food

and medicine with her. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

You

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rs sincerely, Kritesh Patel

Sun Mar 01 2020

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

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183 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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