Nowadays young people are admiring media and sports stars, even though they do not set a good example. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In current days it is common that people idolize all kinds of
celebrites
even when they are not a widely known person
celebrities
portreating
a good role model. In my a representation by picture or portraiture
portraying
opinion it
is never good to have an Accept comma addition
opinion, it
idole
that conforming to an ultimate standard of perfection or excellence; embodying an ideal
ideal
missbehaves
, behave badly
misbehaves
misbehave
misbehaved
becuse
it can become that the for the reason that; on account of
because
persone
who idolizes the celebrity starts to think a human being
person
parson
persons
that is
normal behaviour. Specially
with children it can be a problem to follow Suggestion
Especially
the bad
trends of some Suggestion
the worst
fameous
person.
widely known and esteemed
famous
Firstly
, it can be quite a downside for a
individual to be mesmerized with a well known person with bad Suggestion
an
habbits
. Some people just get caught in an established custom
habits
lifes
of those who are popular in that extend that they want to be just like them. a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
This
is why for them it is normal to imitate what they do. That is
why some people spend way too much money on the stuff they really don't need and on the other
hand they
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hand, they
can not
afford, but they just want to be like their can not
cannot
favourit
music star. There something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
favoured
is
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are
also
those who start to think that drinking alcohol on daily basis
and consuming drugs, is a normal just because some popular soccer player is doing it.
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a daily basis
Secondly
, the kids can be badly affected by a negative side of fameous
stars. As we all know teenagers and children spend a lot of time on social media, internet and television, and they are easily manipulated by their idols. widely known and esteemed
famous
For
instance all
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instance, all
teh
young girls want to look like singers or actors from Hollywood even though those ladies a lot of time promote how important is to look skinny and pretty. definite article
the
This
can have a big effect on a yound
teenage girl to the extend that she can starve herself to anorexia.
In conclusion, (used of living things especially persons) in an early period of life or development or growth
young
celebrites
are being praised by young people in a widely known person
celebrities
this
days even
when their behaviour is not Suggestion
day, even
day even
at
the best. My view on it is that it can have negative effect Suggestion
in
specially
in teenagers. It is not to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
considerd
good to praise someone with poor manners, because one can go the same road as them and not even noticing.carefully weighed
considered
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