Nowadays young people are admiring media and sports stars, even though they do not set a good example. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In current days it is common that people idolize all kinds of
celebrites
a widely known person
celebrities
even when they are not
portreating
a representation by picture or portraiture
portraying
a good role model. In my
opinion it
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opinion, it
is never good to have an
idole
conforming to an ultimate standard of perfection or excellence; embodying an ideal
ideal
that
missbehaves
behave badly
misbehaves
misbehave
misbehaved
,
becuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
it can become that the
persone
a human being
person
parson
persons
who idolizes the celebrity starts to think
that is
normal behaviour.
Specially
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Especially
with children it can be a problem to follow
the bad
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the worst
trends of some
fameous
widely known and esteemed
famous
person.
Firstly
, it can be quite a downside for
a
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an
individual to be mesmerized with a well known person with bad
habbits
an established custom
habits
. Some people just get caught in
lifes
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
of those who are popular in that extend that they want to be just like them.
This
is why for them it is normal to imitate what they do.
That is
why some people spend way too much money on the stuff they really don't need and
on the other
hand they
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hand, they
can not
can not
cannot
afford, but they just want to be like their
favourit
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
favoured
music star. There
is
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are
also
those who start to think that drinking alcohol on
daily basis
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a daily basis
and consuming drugs, is a normal just because some popular soccer player is doing it.
Secondly
, the kids can be badly affected by a negative side of
fameous
widely known and esteemed
famous
stars. As we all know teenagers and children spend a lot of time on social media, internet and television, and they are easily manipulated by their idols.
For
instance all
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instance, all
teh
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the
young girls want to look like singers or actors from Hollywood even though those ladies a lot of time promote how important is to look skinny and pretty.
This
can have a big effect on a
yound
(used of living things especially persons) in an early period of life or development or growth
young
teenage girl to the extend that she can starve herself to anorexia. In conclusion,
celebrites
a widely known person
celebrities
are being praised by young people in
this
days even
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day, even
day even
when their behaviour is not
at
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in
the best. My view on it is that it can have negative effect
specially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
in teenagers. It is not
considerd
carefully weighed
considered
good to praise someone with poor manners, because one can go the same road as them and not even noticing.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • media personalities
  • sports icons
  • role models
  • admiration
  • influence
  • behavior
  • mindset
  • values
  • unethical behavior
  • healthy lifestyles
  • social media platforms
  • celebrity culture
  • career aspirations
  • educational goals
  • positive change
  • ethical standards
  • amplify
  • idolize
  • public perception
  • impressionable
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