In many countries, teenagers are encouraged to find part-time jobs. Some think this is a good development while others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

A number of nations' people have different views about whether or not to advise young adults to

work

part-

time

. While some nation believed it is a positive trend to encourage them to

work

after

school

, I would disagree with the view and the adolescents should concentrate on their

study

first

.

To begin

with, in some countries people tend to believe that teenagers should start to earn their living as early as possible. By working part-

time

that can cultivate them to be an independent person. They will be able to pay their own

school

tuition without family supports.

Furthermore

, they can

also

gain more essential skill from

work

,

such

as working experiences, team cooperation and more. The

study

had found that students who do

part-

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time

job have shown a matured and responsible personality.

Therefore

, many people think it is beneficial for the teenager to

work

in their spare

time

.

On the other hand

, I do believe that teenagers should concentrate on their

study

first

.

Firstly

,

school

life has already long enough for students and sometimes they

also

have homework or assessments need to complete. As a student can be count as a full-

time

job for teenager and

study

is their priority duty. In some country, the

school

time

is normally from early morning to late afternoon

that is

the same as a normal worker. If students are encouraged to

work

after

school

that they will have no

time

to review their lesson from the class or doing their homework. It seems difficult to concentrate during class

time

if they have spent another energy at

work

.

Therefore

, It could lead to failing on their exam because they might lack concentrate on

study

and tiredness from

work

. In conclusion,

although

encouraging the teenager to do a part-

time

job seems to have some benefit to them, I do believe that a student's priority duty is to

study

.In many countries, teenagers are encouraged to find part-

time

jobs. Some think

this

is a good development while others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion