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In many countries, teenagers are encouraged to find part-time jobs. Some think this is a good development while others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

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A number of nations' people have different views about whether or not to advise young adults to
work
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 part-
time
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. While some nation believed it is a positive trend to encourage them to
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 after
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, I would disagree with the view and the adolescents should concentrate on their
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 with, in some countries people tend to believe that teenagers should start to earn their living as early as possible. By working part-
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 that can cultivate them to be an independent person. They will be able to pay their own
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 tuition without family supports.
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, they can
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 gain more essential skill from
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,
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 as working experiences, team cooperation and more. The
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 had found that students who do
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time
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 job have shown a matured and responsible personality.
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, many people think it is beneficial for the teenager to
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 in their spare
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, I do believe that teenagers should concentrate on their
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first
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,
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 life has already long enough for students and sometimes they
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 have homework or assessments need to complete. As a student can be count as a full-
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 job for teenager and
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 is their priority duty. In some country, the
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time
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 is normally from early morning to late afternoon
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 the same as a normal worker. If students are encouraged to
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 after
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 that they will have no
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 to review their lesson from the class or doing their homework. It seems difficult to concentrate during class
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 if they have spent another energy at
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.
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, It could lead to failing on their exam because they might lack concentrate on
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 and tiredness from
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. In conclusion,
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 encouraging the teenager to do a part-
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 job seems to have some benefit to them, I do believe that a student's priority duty is to
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.In many countries, teenagers are encouraged to find part-
time
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 jobs. Some think
this
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 is a good development while others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion
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