Write about the following topic. It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. What are advantages and disadvantages of this development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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The modern era influenced earth to experience dramatic changes for the
last
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few decades. One of these developments reflects itself in the exploration sphere. The vast number of scientists or
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who are interested in wild nature get an opportunity to travel all over the
world
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.The far-flung areas are always on the focus of
people
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. Having a chance to make a trip to the Pole of the South has merits and drawbacks on some level which are will be discussed in
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essay.
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with, humans are always dangerous to natural surrounding.
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, as
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set up their travelling, it means it is the start of pollution. It is one of the sides of negative. When they travel, they try to find out how to take advantage of
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greenwood.
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, they cause the destruction of human lives as well as flora and fauna.
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, scientists think out about their practices in these unreachable
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in order to present their best and gain reputation or title. It opens a way to impose on the natural environment and damage air quality or green life.
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, if visitors or professors evaluate
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worth and intent to protect it from external factors, they could save whole the
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.
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, there are benefits to get familiar with far-reachable
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and present these
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to the
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.
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, there are various kinds of programs which attribute to the culture of the far-distance
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,where ordinary
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cannot travel to. There is a chance to make a trip through their life by the virtual way and to be aware of their living conditions.
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, there are still predators live who are quite far from our
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. Even they do not know whether there is a computer or not as well as smartphones.
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result
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this
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revelation brings them to open new culture and to make a mix with new
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. In conclusion,taking into account these all details, to have access to the new
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has positives in case the explorers or visitors do not intend to destroy it ,
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however
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to defend these worth
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for future, as well as, for high air quality.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • remote natural environment
  • scientific research
  • climate change
  • wildlife
  • natural phenomena
  • disruption
  • ecosystems
  • pollution
  • habitat destruction
  • carbon footprint
  • logistics
  • global warming
  • ethical concern
  • curiosity
  • preservation
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