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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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In the coming times, everyone will prefer to read everything they require on online platforms
instead
 of buying the print version of publications or papers. I strongly disagree with
this
 statement because whatever free might not be legitimate,
moreover
 some people have their own reasons to buy physical material, because of which some population will still prefer to buy newspapers or novels in physical form.
Firstly
, growing online platforms provide a lot of free
news
 and
books
, but those cannot be considered legal and authentic.
This
 is simply because many content creators earn bread and butter through
this
news
 or stories they research and publish, which is impossible to give away for free.
For example
, in India, many journalists solely depend on the money they earn by sharing local events with newspapers;
however
, there is much fake
news
 published on the internet that cannot be trusted.
Furthermore
, some people prefer to buy publications and magazines because they find it more comfortable and less distracting to read physical
books
 rather than on electronic devices.
This
 is due to the fact that traditional
books
 or
news
 are a great way to relax and get away from the distraction mobile devices bring.
For example
, I prefer to read hardcover
books
, as they help me to avoid addictive electronics
such
 as laptops, mobiles, and tablets. In conclusion,
although
 free online material is increasing, people will still continue to purchase hard copies of
books
 and newspapers in future as they are true in nature and more comfortable and help to avoid addictive devices.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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