Development in technology has brought various enviornmental problems. Some believe that people need to live simpler lives to solve environmental problems. Others, however, believe technology is the way to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, the world is quickly adopting technological changes as they are labour-saving and time-efficient. There are many concerned individuals who feel that we should not totally depend on machine-based drivers. Others,

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, believe that robots are safe and well-planned as compared to human begins. I completely agree with the former statement and in

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essay, I will support my view with examples.

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, one of the major advantages of

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robotic invention is that humans are no longer required to learn driving lessons. Previously, when we want to travel by

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or any other vehicle we need to hire a driver or we should have driving knowledge but now without having a driver we can enjoy our

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rides. One

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example is the Tesla cars. Tesla is a vehicle manufacturing company and recently they have introduced a robotic

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where robots can drive the

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and they have been programmed in

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a way that they can even identify the obstacles across the road.

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, we can save the time and effort of a

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operator.

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, we can not completely trust

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vehicles because even though these machines are well programmed and trained but in the end, they are machines and if any program fails

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it is highly inconvenient and it can even risk human lives.

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, when the Tesla company was testing his model, a robot hit an obstacle as he was unable to fetch the object.

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, human drivers are more experienced and in critical conditions, they are more dependable.

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robotic models are costly and

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a common man could not afford these transport services. To sum up, despite there are many reasons why we should support driverless transports, I'm inclined to think that they are not trustworthy and they need more testing and training before launching to markets.

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Art classes, such as painting and drawing are as important to a child's development as other subjects so it should bes compulsory in high schools. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Some people think a country benefits from a large proportion of young university students, others think sending young people to universities only lead to graduate unemployment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.