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People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems. Give your opinion.

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Many
people
 state that to deal with environmental issues, gov
ernment sh
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the government
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ould raise
fuel
pri
ce fo
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prices
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r cars and other
vehicles
. I totally agree with
this
 statement for the following reasons.
Firstly
, if authority raises taxes on petrol,
this
 would be able to reduce the density of means of transportation. To be more specific, the number of cars for journeys will be constrained, which helps to cut down emi
ssion, a
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emissions
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 detrimental factor contributing to gre
enhouse ef
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the greenhouse
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fect. Statistics show that the figure of
ve
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for
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hicles for long journeys has declined significantly by 20% since the
fuel
 cost climbed that improves the air quality considerably in recent years. Another point to consider is that
this
 rising in
fuel
price
 can provide the incentive for alternative
fuel
. In more det
ails,
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detail
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people
 are encouraged to use
fuel
 based on waste products
such
 as vegetable oil or corn-based ethanol. Research sho
w th
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shows
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at using these environment-friendly fuels can decrease a l
a
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rge amount of carbon dioxide rel
easing to
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released
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th
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into
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e environment.
Therefore
, inc
rease in
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an increase
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 the
price
 of
fuel
 can limit environmental problems. Despite these, many
people
 still claim that government can raise cit
izen’s aw
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citizens’
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areness of some
fue
l efficient ve
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fuel-efficient
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hicle types
instead
 of increasing the
fuel
 cost. They may believe that these means of transportation have sma
rt op
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a smart
the smart
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e
ration to
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operations
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 help economize petrol and decrease the amount of exhausted gas. To
this
, I will argue that
fuel
-saving
vehicles
 may not be a perfect solution because of customer unaffordability. Specifically, it is exc
essive fi
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an excessive
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nancial cost for con
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a consumer
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sumer to
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consumers
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 purchase
this
 product. In my opinion, upgrading the infrastructure of transportation is considered to be an effective way.
In other words
, a good transport system can drop traffic jam
wh
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jams
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ich produces a vast amount of exh
austed fu
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exhausting
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mes causing air pollution. Clearly, imp
rovement tr
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an improvement
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a
ffic st
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of traffic
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ructure is necessary for solving environmental issues. In conclusion, there are
a
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is
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wide range of solutions to help cope with traffic and pollution problems.
However
, a substantial increase in
fuel
price
 would be a useful method for env
ironment. I
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the environment
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t can not only help to reduce the crowd of
vehicles
, but
also
 encourage
people
 to use friendly
fuel
.
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