People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems. Give your opinion.

Many

people

state that to deal with environmental issues, gov

ernment sh

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the government

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ould raise

fuel

pri

ce fo

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prices

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r cars and other

vehicles

. I totally agree with

this

statement for the following reasons.

Firstly

, if authority raises taxes on petrol,

this

would be able to reduce the density of means of transportation. To be more specific, the number of cars for journeys will be constrained, which helps to cut down emi

ssion, a

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emissions

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detrimental factor contributing to gre

enhouse ef

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the greenhouse

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fect. Statistics show that the figure of

ve

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hicles for long journeys has declined significantly by 20% since the

fuel

cost climbed that improves the air quality considerably in recent years. Another point to consider is that

this

rising in

fuel

price

can provide the incentive for alternative

fuel

. In more det

ails,

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detail

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people

are encouraged to use

fuel

based on waste products

such

as vegetable oil or corn-based ethanol. Research sho

w th

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at using these environment-friendly fuels can decrease a l

a

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rge amount of carbon dioxide rel

easing to

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released

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th

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into

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e environment.

Therefore

, inc

rease in

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an increase

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the

price

of

fuel

can limit environmental problems. Despite these, many

people

still claim that government can raise cit

izen’s aw

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citizens’

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areness of some

fue

l efficient ve

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fuel-efficient

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hicle types

instead

of increasing the

fuel

cost. They may believe that these means of transportation have sma

rt op

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a smart

the smart

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e

ration to

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operations

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help economize petrol and decrease the amount of exhausted gas. To

this

, I will argue that

fuel

-saving

vehicles

may not be a perfect solution because of customer unaffordability. Specifically, it is exc

essive fi

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an excessive

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nancial cost for con

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a consumer

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sumer to

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consumers

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purchase

this

product. In my opinion, upgrading the infrastructure of transportation is considered to be an effective way.

In other words

, a good transport system can drop traffic jam

wh

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jams

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ich produces a vast amount of exh

austed fu

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exhausting

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mes causing air pollution. Clearly, imp

rovement tr

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an improvement

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a

ffic st

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of traffic

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ructure is necessary for solving environmental issues. In conclusion, there are

a

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is

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wide range of solutions to help cope with traffic and pollution problems.

However

, a substantial increase in

fuel

price

would be a useful method for env

ironment. I

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the environment

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t can not only help to reduce the crowd of

vehicles

, but

also

encourage

people

to use friendly

fuel

.