Some scientists think that there are intelligent life on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and that it could be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some scientists believe that
communication
between
Earth
and intelligent celestial should be imposed,
however
, others refute
this
idea as they find it hazardous. While it is a risk to contact unknown celestial creatures as these might have the intention to kill
humans
instead
of establishing cooperation, it is of my opinion that
communication
with
life
on other planets will benefit both parts mutually, as
knowledge
can be shared and exploited.
Life
on other planets than
Earth
might consider the human species as a threat.
That is
to say, celestial creatures will likely have another body language and a type of
communication
different from that of human beings, which can make
communication
challenging and difficult.
This
might cause frustration and human beings may be judged as strange and ludicrous by the non-terrestrial creatures and potentially make them willing to destroy the human race.
Although
contacting the unknown comes with a risk, I believe there is a potential for fruitful consequences from
this
contact. Contacting objects in space may be positive for the planet
Earth
as
life
in space may be willing to share
knowledge
with
humans
that both benefit from.
This
is because intelligent
life
will be able to understand that peace and tranquillity are more attractive than hatred and war. They will understand that by sharing
knowledge
both types of lives will have better chances of survival.
For example
, the
knowledge
of how to survive and travel in space among those living on another planet than
Earth
will be useful for
humans
and vice versa. To conclude, despite the fact that unknown celestial
life
can be dangerous towards
humans
, I think contact with these will likely be beneficial for the human race as
knowledge
can be shared that will benefit
life
regardless of the planet they live on.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
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