Many government thino that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many countries in today's nature are fighting the battle of growth and development in lieu of attaining the highest position or becoming a
First
earth country.
However
,In my opinion,Be it Economic,Technological Agricultural,Industrial or Be it less focused areas,For ,example Education,Tourism law and Enforcement bodies or Information technology.Each and every sector is very important to provide stability of any regime,If handled and managed carefully.I will discuss both views and ,
subsequently
will share my opinion
accordingly
.
Firstly
,If we look up the
first
world countries ,They all have one thing in common,The well managed and organised framework government system ,In which proper Economic body is being run by the well equipped technological and agricultural system ,depending on the natural reservoir e.g: oil,gas,gold,minerals etc .
However
,It can
also
see those territories, that have strong Armed forces ,are more confident.
Secondly
,If we probe in into a detailed manner,So many aspects have been ignored somehow.Like If we look into the education system,Tourism,Law and order situation and above all the information Technology,They lack somehow.The reason is those countries never welcome outsiders other than their citizens to stay and work specially in the field of IT.They are scared of being exposed to the outside world.
Although
If the start focusing on the least covered part,No wonder one day their government can become the best
Thirdly
, to my viewpoint,A government need to focus on all aspects on the basis of equal distribution of equality and authority.
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