It is too expensive to look after and repair old building .Tho money should spend on building new modern buildings instead .To what extent do you agree or disagree.

As many

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have been built across the world, it is easily seen that there are a number of aged

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. Though quite much money is being spent on them, some argue that the money should be for

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new ones rather than repairing old ones.

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with, despite the fact that it is costly to keep traditional architecture, there surely are some beneficial aspects to it.

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and foremost, a city with them in it could have a unique atmosphere and exotic view of their own, which is what brings people from other provinces for a tour. Considering tourism usually makes a major contribution to the local economy, it seems worth keeping. Not only that, it can save more resources and energy to look after old

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than to build new ones from scratch.

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, with regard to the risk of accidents, it is unacceptable to have aged

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in a massive area. They are not only more exposed to the danger of environmental disasters but

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have a higher chance of collapse. Renovating those

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does not mean that important factors

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as beams or columns can be replaced and fixed. Thinking about the citizens who live nearby, it is not necessarily the right answer just to preserve old

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as long as we are able to, some of which do not even look great, but messy and creepy. To conclude, in spite of the beauty of traditional

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, I believe prioritizing human lives should be done

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.

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, I somewhat disagree with

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notion.