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The Table shows how many international students study in Canada and the United States by country of origin. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The Table shows how many international students study in Canada and the United States by country of origin. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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 the number of international
students
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 learning in
Canada
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 and the United
States
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 in 2002 and 2003. The data
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 describe the change over the year in percentage.
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, China and India have become the countries of origin where most international learners study in North America.
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, many
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 from
Canada
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 attend school in the United
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 and vice versa. In
Canada
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, there were 70.000 international
students
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 in 2003. The numbers are grown 17% since the
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 year. Most of these learners come from China, with approximately a tenth of 59.870 in 2002,
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 the portion remained the same in 2003. A different situation occurred in the United
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, where most international
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 come from India.
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 the total decreased by 9% in 2003, the South Asia countries still dominated the United
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 with 182.000
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, which is around a third of total international
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.
In addition
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, the number of international
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 in the United
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 is more than eight times rather of
Canada
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, canada, states with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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