In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. what are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some traditions, there have a wording's teaching method for

children

that if they work hard sufficiently, they will succeed in the things that they want. Personally, I think it has several benefits to teaching

children

. In

this

essay, I will discuss both viewpoints and why they should be advantageous.

To begin

, some countries teach a kid that they should try hard enough if they want to achieve anything.

This

is because by trying several times,

children

can realize that they did a mistake in the first step, and

then

they learn to solve it and try to do it in the best way.

For example

,

children

want to have a toy but

parents

offer a condition that they have to be good students and get a higher score at school,

then

they will buy it for them. So,

this

condition can convince the kids to have energetic studying and focus on their tasks. Another example,

children

will be good learners because it becomes a habit which is that they practised a lot to try harder in something to get something.

Therefore

,

children

can endure much more than other kids when they have difficult situations.

On the other hand

,

this

instruction might be a drawback for some

children

.

This

is

due to

if

children

cannot succeed in the things that they really want ,

then

they will sorrow and disappointed it.

Likewise

,

children

may not try hard again and they might do the wrong ways to receive the things that they want.

For instance

, if they really try hard in their studying because they require a gift from

parents

but scores are not reacting in a good way with high prediction,

children

might seek worse ways to get the scores or a gift

such

as stealing or corruption in school.

As a result

,

parents

should take care of and follow kids' behaviour closely.

To conclude

, hard trying to receive achievement is told for

children

in some countries, the result of

this

message can be benefits or setbacks are depend on

parents

. In my opinion, I believe that

this

message could help

children

have endured habits and focus on their education.

Moreover

,

parents

and teachers should get conscious instructions closely with

children

,

then

they will try hard in the proper ways.