In the future, more people choose to go on holiday in their own countries and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

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Vacations are an easy
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for many who are exhausted from their daily life.
Now-a-days
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, many prefer to vacation in their own
countries
instead
of going somewhere else. In
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essay, I will discuss why they choose to do so and why vacations abroad are not a bad idea. Going overseas is expensive and
instead
spending at home is more affordable. Buying a ticket is becoming
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by the day, and even a flight to a
neighboring
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country
ends up costing a lot. In
this
high inflation
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economy, many prefer to save money and
instead
spend their free time in their home
countries
. A trip to a
neighboring
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city,
for instance
, is much
more
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cheaper than a trip to a nearby
country
.
Furthermore
, travelling to a different
country
might require a visa, which is
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own can of worms and adds
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to the increasing cost.
On the other hand
, travelling to different
countries
helps open our
mind
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to different cultures. Staying in one's own border leads to a homogenous way of thinking which
limits
open-mindedness. It
also
limits
the
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opportunity
to discover something new.
For example
, a person who prefers to stay in their own region misses out on what's going
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a different
country
, maybe a
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event. They miss out on mingling with other traditions, learning new languages and trying out unique dishes. Staying within our
boundary
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limits
our perspective and we stay the same
instead
of progressing.
To conclude
, travelling abroad isn't easy for many people and the rising cost forces many to vacation in their home
countries
.
However
,
this
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severely
impacts our ability to interact with others and
limits
our way of thinking.
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