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everybody should be allowed to university study programs regardless of their level of academic ability. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience?

#everybody #university #study #programs #level #ability
Studies play a vital role
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overall
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individuals. Some folks believe that university qualification or higher studies is important for everyone
while
other
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others
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 think it is not crucial for everyone. I
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practically
partially
 agree with both opinions. In
this
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 the grounds and suitable
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instances
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 to promote my perspective.
To begin
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plethora
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 of
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reasons
reason
 why masses need
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higher education. First and foremost, when
people
 go to apply for
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jobs. The employer or HR first look
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applicant
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 degree
therefore
 folks need a degree to get a suitable career.
Likewise
, when
people
 have a score of degree
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more job opportunities will open for them.
Additionally
, in
this
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cut-third-world
 or competitive world having university
degrees
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degree
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 is
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essential.
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, there is no doubt that some
people
 don't have higher degrees but
still
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 they are successful in their life. There are numerous
reaosn
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reasons
reason
 behind their achievement.
Firstly
, some individuals don't have degrees but have skilled.
For instance
, some
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constructed
worker
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workers
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 earn more rather
then
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 qualified
people
such
 as teachers. Not only but all, some famous businessmen in India don't have many business
degre
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degrees
;
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however
, they have
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 to run their businesses.
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Turbine India conducted a survey in which
analzed
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analysed
 the
skilled
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number of skilled
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people
 in India is increased by 12% in 2022
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 back in 2022. In conclusion, there is an undeniable fact that education brings a lot
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Henceforth
, we
also
 have to give
inportance
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importance
 to skilled professions.
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