It is important for people to take risks, both in professional lives and personal lives. Do think advantages of taking risks outweigh disadvantages?

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Undoubtedly, being a
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taker professionally is crucial as world needs people of
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personality to survive: if Steve Jobs and Bill Gates hadn't risked, the age of burgeoning technological era would not have come ever. Yet, in my opinion, not always
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takers succeed in their personal lifestyle, so I will try to extend
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,
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taking is among the main leadership qualities and history is proving
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conception for many years. All historical figures who had been brave enough to take
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were the most successful ones: Steve Jobs, Bill Gates, Colonel Sanders; former two of them contributing to the technological development and third one introducing world with their favourite Kentucky chicken in spite of his retirement age which is considered for him start of new career
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it is end for others. They all took
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to change the world even if they were laughed at and called stupids for their unbelievably clever plans just because these ideas seemed to be unachievable for others. Not giving attention to people's negative attitudes, they all achieved for what they strived with determination and bravery to take
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.
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, even nowadays in
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age of high competition for professional prospects, taking
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wins as when other candidates sitting in two thoughts come to one determined decision,
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takers will have already impressed the employer and possessed the jobs.
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, being
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taker in professional lifestyle had always won in history and will win in the current era of highly professional competition.
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, in my point of view,
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takers in person
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mostly suffer from tense family relationships and less attention and respect by their close people. Since, if
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taking brings professional benefits avoiding competitors, it can put an end in close-knit relationships as there is no rivals in family: relationships are so delicate that taking
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only causes conflicts. Inevitably,
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demands quick individual solution but for the sake of close bonds in personal
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, it is not worthwhile to hurry. The most proper and fair solution in individual standard of living is one
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decided
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the family without any rush. If the person is always taking
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to reach particular success, the other family members begin to feel themselves ignored, ultimately, leading to their disrespect towards
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taker member.
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, victims as the result of
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professionally are for profit, but in personal
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, taking
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with the expected result of breaking down family bonds is unworthy.
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, it is advantageous to take
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in professional
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turning fabulous range of unachievable plans into reality, but in personal lifestyle, it may have come at a very high price leading to vulnerable family ties and common rivalries.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Opportunities
  • Growth
  • Innovation
  • Challenges
  • Self-discovery
  • Resilience
  • Uncertainty
  • Consequences
  • Calculated risks
  • Stagnation
  • Regret
  • Comfort zone
  • Entrepreneurship
  • Adventurous spirit
  • Thriving
  • Failure
  • Mitigate
  • Reap the rewards
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