Should private schools receive government funding? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Numerous people say that the government should spend the
budget
to support private schools
. Due to
this
, it will help develop the education system. In my opinion, they should not be funded by public money, private schools
already have high profits from school tuition and private academies are businesses created to seek profit like other businesses.
To begin
with, nowadays the average of private schools
is increasing due to
the demand of parents
that want to give wonderful things to their kids so education is essential for children, several families believe that the expensive tuition can guarantee qualities of their children's life. Since, the negative news about private academies like, in my hometown teachers use violence with the kindergarten students
resulting in serious injury or some phrontistery teachers are unable to take care of all pupils because of the different numbers, which may cause toddlers to be naughty and have accidents. Owing to, lower or in some poor area is free phrontistery tuition. Hence
, private centres of learning institutions are in demand for parents
today.
Moreover
, currently these private organisations there are many new courses being promoted as relevant to today's globalized life. For instance
, some private are advertising that they focus on technology and start teaching students
kindergarten ages so some alma maters guarantee that their students
have access to top universities in countries worldwide therefore
, it has attracted more attention from wealthy parents
. Meanwhile, public schools
have a problem with the number of teachers being in contrast
to the number of students
and still have negative stereotypes from national countries also
the budget
is not enough for every centre of learning, so the budget
should be used to manage government schools
to have better quality than before.
To sum up
, government authorities should take care of managing the budget
for developing the education system in every public sector, especially in poor areas. For this
purpose raising the standards of the academy and building confidence among parents
to erase the stereotype of state alma mater that are not of quality.Submitted by np.napatping on
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