There are currently many endangered species at risk of extinction and it’s equally important to save all of them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that many
species
are critically endangered of extinction and it is equally important to save all of them. I strongly agree with the statement because having diverse fauna for future Use synonyms
generations
and protecting the ecosystem is crucial to maintaining the natural heritage and maintaining the cycle of life.
Preserving natural heritage for future Use synonyms
generations
is important because our younger generation can learn which is the role of every Use synonyms
species
. Learning from them and teaching how we can recover them and protect their Use synonyms
habitat
for younger Use synonyms
generations
will ensure the natural cycle of life. Use synonyms
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, bees are a Linking Words
species
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that is
at risk of extinction and is important to recognize that they have a crucial role in food production. Linking Words
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, by recovering Linking Words
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species
we are ensuring that we can grow our food production and no Use synonyms
further
changes will affect our Linking Words
habitat
and the rest of the Use synonyms
species
.
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species
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also
protect the ecosystem by avoiding Linking Words
habitat
destruction. One of the main actions that we can take to avoid the destruction of habitats is to designate protected areas that no humans can alter. With Use synonyms
this
action, we can tackle more than one problem at the same time, protecting the Linking Words
habitat
and the Use synonyms
species
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For instance
, by protecting an area you are letting the entire ecosystem grow permitting animals, insects, plants and so on to be recovered.
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To conclude
, I firmly agree that all Linking Words
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species
have to be equally important to have a natural heritage for future Use synonyms
generations
and protect the biosphere and Use synonyms
habitat
to maintain the cycle of life.Use synonyms
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