There are currently many endangered species at risk of extinction and it’s equally important to save all of them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that many
species
are critically endangered of extinction and it is equally important to save all of them. I strongly agree with the statement because having diverse fauna for future
generations
and protecting the ecosystem is crucial to maintaining the natural heritage and maintaining the cycle of life. Preserving natural heritage for future
generations
is important because our younger generation can learn which is the role of every
species
. Learning from them and teaching how we can recover them and protect their
habitat
for younger
generations
will ensure the natural cycle of life.
For example
, bees are a
species
that is
at risk of extinction and is important to recognize that they have a crucial role in food production.
Furthermore
, by recovering
this
species
we are ensuring that we can grow our food production and no
further
changes will affect our
habitat
and the rest of the
species
. To save all of the
species
equally, we should
also
protect the ecosystem by avoiding
habitat
destruction. One of the main actions that we can take to avoid the destruction of habitats is to designate protected areas that no humans can alter. With
this
action, we can tackle more than one problem at the same time, protecting the
habitat
and the
species
.
For instance
, by protecting an area you are letting the entire ecosystem grow permitting animals, insects, plants and so on to be recovered.
To conclude
, I firmly agree that all
the
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species
have to be equally important to have a natural heritage for future
generations
and protect the biosphere and
habitat
to maintain the cycle of life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • endangered species
  • extinction
  • ecosystem
  • biodiversity
  • pollinators
  • ecological impact
  • ripple effects
  • interdependent
  • resource allocation
  • critically endangered
  • recovery
  • intervention
  • habitat destruction
  • broader environmental issues
  • habitats and ecosystems
  • natural heritage
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