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in some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anyting if they try hard enought. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Facing numerous targets appearing day by day, most children whose influenced directly by their parents, tend to try hard themselves because they believed they are able to complete the target drew easily even though the

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In some cultures, children are often thought that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. what are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Children are raised by various beliefs in different parts of the world. Many people make children believe that anything can be achievable by trying hard. Although expressing this idea has some benefits, it can be harmful

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