Some people believe that the only way to see God is through Jesus, others think that there are other ways regardless. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt about the existence of a supreme being.

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some people believe that there are various paths to seeing God, others dispute

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and argue that Jesus alone is the pathway to God. In

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easy, I will discuss both sides of the argument and explain my support for the former view. On the one hand, some people think that

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they're

different routes to meet with Jehovah.

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is because several events in the Old Testament show clearly encounters between various prophets and Yahweh. To illustrate, Daniel, while in the lions' den prayed to God Almighty and he was delivered.

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, Mosses, while leading the children of

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the Israelites

out of Egypt, God instructed him to strike the rod on the Red Sea and the sea divided so they can pass through.

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, since they have seen God,

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Jesus Christ is not the only passage to God.

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, I would argue that Christ is the only way to see God.

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of landmark

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Happenings

in the New Testament.

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, John prophesied that God is sending a messiah whose shoes he is unfit to lace. That

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messiah will wash away our sins, raise the dead, enable us to see Jehovah through him. All these came to pass.

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, if the prophecy did not materialize,

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there must be other paths to see Jehovah. In conclusion,

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some people think that there are different ways in which Yahweh can be seen as manifested in the Old Testament, I believe that the only way to meet with Jehovah is through Jesus Christ as revealed in the New Testament.

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May 29, 2019

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

278 words

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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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