Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own idea.
In the present era, marketing by advertising has a more popular impact on society. Some
people
believe that advertising is so boring and does not have more benefits to successful product
sales. In my opinion, the conditions for the success
of any business or product
are good and effective marketing. This
essay will discuss both views.
On the one hand, companies where they have successful advertising always attract the attention of people
through creativity or crazy ideas. In other words
, they have various advertising to attract people
. Moreover
, companies must determine the appropriate age group for the product
and create an advertisement
that suits them. For example
, I saw an advertisement
on television for kids it has a lot of things to tempt children such
as colours, toys and balloons.
On the other hand
, Sometimes people
do not pay attention to advertisements for several reasons. First,
excessive advertising duration. People
when see any advertisement
they want to see summarize of the product
not all the boring details. Second,
repeat the advertising anywhere and anytime. Sometimes people
feel bored when they see the advertisement
many times and they simply press skipping. Third,
choosing new advertising platforms controls its success
. For instance
, people
do not pay attention to newspaper advertisements but people
are interested in advertisements by Snapchat or Instagram.
In conclusion, it is difficult to determine the success
or failure of an advertisement
except for several factors that must be taken into consideration.However
, from my perspective, the advertisement
plays a significant role in the success
of the business or product
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task achievement
While you've provided a comprehensive discussion, make sure to integrate your own opinion more explicitly within the individual body paragraphs, possibly by referencing your stance in each argument.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that the language flow in paragraphs is smoother by using cohesive devices such as transition words. This will provide a more structured feel to your essay.
task achievement
You've given relevant examples to illustrate how advertising is effective and how it can fail, which strengthens your argument.
coherence cohesion
The essay starts with a clear introduction of the topic and ends with a conclusive statement that encapsulates your viewpoint well.