Some believe that people should not continue to work once they reach the age of retirement. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience.

It is a debated issue whether workers should retain their jobs or retire from

service

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the service

once they attain their termination

age

. I partly agree that people should retire from their

work

once they are of

age

with the following reasons. Aged individuals are assumed to occupy space for the younger generation in the workforce. When the labour market is saturated with people who are of retirement

age there

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age, there

is little or no vacancy for young school leavers. A relevant study shows that nations like Japan, who retain the

aged for

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aged, for

a

longer

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long

time have more unemployed youths.

Therefore

, the

work

force is devoid of fresh ideas

from

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for

youngsters.

Also

, ageing is accompanied

with

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by

weakness and various ailments. To illustrate, Jobs which require standing or taking a particular posture for a long time might not be suitable for the old because most of them have one health issue or the other. For

this

reason, they are discontinued

form

a giver or sender

from

woking

actively engaged in paid work

working

. In

contast

the opposition or dissimilarity of things that are compared

contrast

context

, as one does a particular vocation for a long time, experience is gained. Most companies find it very difficult to retire their aged staff because of their knowledge about the job.

For instance

, In Japan, staff are trained and retained for years and it is quite tough to let go of

such

experienced staff.

Thus

, individuals are left to

work

even when they attain termination

age

.

In addition

, incomes generated while working at old

age

becomes handy for the aged. They

aslo

in addition

also

have various needs which

requires

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require

to be sorted out. In order

wards

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to ward

, they need to

work

to make ends meet. In conclusion,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

am of the opinion that aged people should be allowed to

work

so as to share

useful experience

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the useful experience

useful experiences

with the younger ones and

also

to enable them meet their financial needs through wages that are being paid.

Also

, more job opportunities should be available to the younger generation too.