The use of smartphones is decreasing our collective intelligence because we are reliant on the technology not on our own minds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Owing to advancement in technology, many people are dependent on gadgets. Many
notions
a politically organized body of people under a single government
nations
that, use of smartphones has produced a detrimental impact on our intellectual level, as we are dependent on them,
instead
of our minds. I partially agree
to
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with
this
statement.
Although
, smartphones have created ease in life of mankind, dependency on them has
harmful effect
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harmful effects
a harmful effect
on our intellect. It is the nature of humans to opt for things that creates comfort in life without considering perilous outcome,
this
is the case with
this
ubiquitous technology. As an illustration, youngsters nowadays defer to do manual simple calculation by brainstorming as they can simply get the answer by clicking a button via online calculator app present
in
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on
phone
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the phone
.
Hence
it is common to opt for comfort rather than intellectual thinking as
new generation
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a new generation
the new generation
is becoming dependent on
hand held
small and light enough to be operated while you hold it in your hands
handheld
technologies.
In contrast
, to
dangerous effects
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the dangerous effects
of dependency on smartphones, in reality, it boosts our memory.
Consequently
, producing
positive impact
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a positive impact
on our mental health.
For instance
, a study done in Pakistan revealed that people who continuously set reminders on their phone enhances their memory as continuous repetition has profound impact on spatial awareness.
This
method was considered classical in ancient times to create productive thinking and long term memories.
Therefore
,
healthy
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health
benefits of smartphone technology must be taken into consideration. To conclude, in my opinion,
dependency
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depending
on hand held technologies has positive as well as negative aspects to consider.
Although
it
defers
be different
differs
from reasonable thinking, it
also
enhances our memory process and strengthen it.
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