In some parts of the world, it is increasingly popular to research the history of one's own family. Why do people want to do this? Is it a positive or negative development?

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In recent years, family history research has been becoming more popular than it was. In my opinion, I would argue that

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trend should be as a positive development. There are several factors

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encouraging the study of our family history. In the

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place, curiosity is the main cause that leads to making people intend to dig up about their family traditions. They would desire to know their roots, where our forefathers came from or how they earned their living. In the

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place, some people must take

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family history because of the fact that they would have health problems and one of them is genetically inheritable medical conditions

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as asthma or diabetes. In reality, understand genetic make-up provides an early lifestyle intervention to mitigate the adverse effects of these diseases. Doing research on family traditions renders countless rewards and

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may be an amazing journey which could

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the offspring

may find it astonishing to dig up the details of their predecessors' lifestyle or some of the achievements that ancestors attained throughout their lifetime. In fact, no other activities can bring an experience like

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, learning about a family tree would be a means of self-motivation.

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, we could drive ourselves through any difficulty when we realize that our ancestors overcame the seemingly insurmountable obstacles, to regard our difficulties as trivial ones. In conclusion, researching the origins of a person is becoming more popular in society and I believe that it is a positive development.

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Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Topic Vocabulary:

Genealogy
Heritage
Ancestry
Lineage
Descendants
Forebears
Pedigree
Dynasty
Progenitors
Ethnicity
Genetic predisposition
Familial ties
Archival records
Hereditary
Kinship
Self-identity
Patriarchy/Matriarchy

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In some parts of the world, it is increasingly popular to research the history of one's own family. Why do people want to do this? Is it a positive or negative development?

Include an introduction and conclusion

In some countries around the world men and women are having children later in life. What are the reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life?

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Some people say that it is possible for a country to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Some people think government should spent money on languages that are dying and a few number of people uses them, some think this is a waste of resources. Discuss both views and tell what's your take on this issue.