The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. what are the causes of this continued rise? do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

The steady increase in the world's total number of people is the biggest negative issue experienced by the human beings nowadays. There are two main reasons of rising gross

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individuals, including

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rate

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compared to mortality

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and poor

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control in the underdeveloped countries. I entirely agree that

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issue is a crucial

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for the mankind The

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and foremost reason for the increase of number of people is

high birthrate

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the high birth rate

high birth rate

a high birth rate

compared to

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the mortality rate

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is because of the standard medication facilities for almost all the people around the world. It seemed 20 years back that

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a significant number

of individuals were

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dying

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from

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diseases, but

they didn’t get adequate treatment from clinic or doctors.

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situation is no more in

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modern world now.

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, it is still

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an obvious problem

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for climbing high

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is the uncontrolled

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rate

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in

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the poorest

or poverty stricken countries.

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has been happening due to the substandard education

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among the people. Some people even take three or four children by their

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own, although

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they do not have good enough financial capability to feed them properly. According to my point of view, increasing huge

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is a critical

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for everyone. Nowadays, there have been some recorded instances

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different governments that their citizens are facing problems of managing adequate amount of food items. Beside

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, universities and other colleges are unable to intake a lot of students for providing quality education.

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is why a countable proportion of pupils are depriving from standard schooling. In conclusion, it is said that the continuous rise of

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is the gigantic

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experienced by several authorities and human living standard has slowed down. There are several causes for

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has already

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discussed, including

high

birth

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rate

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and low mortality

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. I entirely agree that

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huge

population

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is the substantial challenge faced by humanity.