The use of electronic media has a negative effect on personal relationships between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the development of technology,
people
tend to use electronic
media
more and more. Some
people
think that it affects negatively
on
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people
's
relationships
. Personally, I agree with
this
idea, but I still believe it has some positive effects as now will be explained. On one hand, electronic
media
are likely to
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of the reasons causing problems in
relationships
.
Firstly
, using electronic
media
such
as mobile phones makes them worse in communication.
People
may have a tendency to rely on it to send messages
instead
of talking in person.
Secondly
, excessively using electronic
media
could reduce communication skills. Indeed,
people
do not need to use body language, which makes them find it difficult to explain their own thoughts when facing to face.
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,
due to
fewer interactions,
people
would face the risk of lacking confidence which makes them scared of public speaking.
On the other hand
, electronic
media
are
also
a key feature contributing to making
relationships
better. If in the past
people
had to spend a month on sending a message, nowadays thanks to the growth of advanced technology, particularly electronic
media
, it helps
people
to receive messages immediately or even see each other through video calls.
Furthermore
,
the
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development of technology, many social networks were born
such
as Twitter and Facebook,
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users to make friends from all over the world, which
help
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to widen their personal
relationships
. In conclusion, I think electronic
media
has its own benefits and downsides. It all depends on how
people
use them.
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