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The chart gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015 , and future projectios for 2025

The chart gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015 , and future projectios for 2025
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The bar chart shows the
exports
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 of
Someland
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Homeland
 in 2005,
2015
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and 2015
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, and the projected
exports
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 in 2025. The main
exports
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 in the three years are
meat
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products
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,
dairy
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products
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 and international
tourism
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.
While
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 Someland’s main
exports
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 of
meat
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products
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 declined from 2005 to 2015, the
exports
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 of
dairy
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products
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 and international
tourism
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 increased.
Dairy
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products
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 witnessed the largest
percent
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 increase in
exports
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 from 2005 to 2015. The
exports
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 of
meat
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products
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is
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 expected to drop from 2015 to 2025.
Although
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dairy
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products
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product
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exports
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 increased from 2005 to 2015, they are expected to decrease by 2025.
The international
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International
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tourism
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exports
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is
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 expected to continue growing until 2025, consistently. International
tourism
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exports
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is
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 expected to have the largest USD billion value of all
exports
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 by 2025. In conclusion, International
tourism
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exports
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along with
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dairy
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products
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exports
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 are expected to be the two main
exports
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 of
Someland
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Homeland
 in 2025. The
exports
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 of
meat
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products
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 do not have a bright future in Someland’s
exports
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.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, meat, products, dairy, tourism with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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