In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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In recent decades, people tend to prefer reading E-books
to
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for
paper books.
Although
,
this
trend has the disadvantage which is detrimental to individual eyes, but the advantage seems overwhelmingly due to
conveniences
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the conveniences
. One the one hand, one of the main reason which is considered as a drawback of E-books is that it causes harmful to visions.
First
, since, in the modern life, there are a number of technique items,
those
(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
thus
bring not only many benefits but
also
drawbacks.
This
means that, spending a great deal of time on using eBooks, people healthy will be
effected
acted upon; influenced
affected
by different ills,
such
as heart attack, obesity, especially
near-sighted
unable to see distant objects clearly
nearsighted
.
For example
, according to research by Vietnam Medical University, which is the biggest school about teaching medicine, in 2018, 45% of people got short-sighted by using too
much
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many
mobile phones, computer and E-books as well while only 35% due to
gene
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genetics
and 20% by other reasons.
On the other hand
, the possible advantage is a user-friendly for readers. Nowadays, people are busy to make a living, so
physical
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physically
travel to book stores and looking for a book take them a lot of time.
This
means that, E-books provided various books
such
as history, science and so on, people can enjoy reading different kind of books with a device.
For example
, electronic books can contain millions of different
subject
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subjects
, which depend on memory. In conclusion, the drawback of
this
trend is harmful to people’s
eyes but
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eyes, but
the benefits will be more overweight because of the convenience.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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