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Nowadays people have adopted an unhealthy lifestyle. Why do you think this is. How could this problem be solved?

#people #lifestyle
A dangerous style of living is being
preffered
more desirable than another
preferred
proffered
prepared
 by the people these days. Multiple
reasons including
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reasons, including
unaffordable nature
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the unavoidable nature
unavoidable nature
 of meals as well as people's taste of tongue forces them to do
this
.
However
, various needed actions are there to be taken to reverse
this
 issue and are described below. Undoubtedly, healthy style of living is not affordable to everyone as the traditional nutrition price is prohibitively high. While, a large proportion of people
belongs
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belong
 to middle income group. So, they binge on eating unfriendly meals
instead
 of having
highly
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high
 priced food loaded with required vitamins and minerals. Not only the expensiveness, the tempting nature of junk food allures the consumers due to its special additives. In turn, eaters are unable to stop themselves and prefer eating them to satisfy their hunger. To put an end to
this
 unhealthy adoption, people are needed to grow crops on their own in their compact garden. In which, cultivation of expensive vegetables and fruits should be done.
In other words
,
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,
subsistence agriculture is needed to be promoted in which output is targeted to feed family members not to do
surplus trade
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surplus, trade
 and
this
 practice is commonly followed by the Indians today. The another way to offset
this
 issue is to encourage households to learn cooking,
specially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
 mothers who can take courses to improve their culinary skills and make their families eat at home
.
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.
 To conclude, undoubtedly the unsafe lifestyle has trapped us wholly due to its reasonable nature, still by cooking scrumptious meals at home as well as by growing them in our kitchen gardens,
this
 problem is possible to be curbed.

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