Some students take a year off between school and university, to work or to travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
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or journey before they matriculate due to some merits, whereas others do not do so because of some demerits. I would argue that the advantages of the Use synonyms
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before entering universities is outweighed by its drawbacks. Use synonyms
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delay to matriculate may affect their success in their Use synonyms
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