Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60, it could cause problems. Do you agree or disagree?

There is a wide range of points of view on the subject of whether it is dangerous when people over the
age
of 60 works. While some still hold conventional view that individuals older than 60 can still benefit to the society and employers, it is my own conviction that it can cause lots of problems and I am against elderly people at workplaces. In some countries, people are required by the law to retire and there many reasons for that. The
first
and the most important are health problems connected to the
age
. In course of time, individual's speed of neurons becomes slower, which leads to problems
such
as bad eyesight, distracted attention and different brain related disease, like Alzheimer's disease.
This
can lead to serious issues related the safety of surrounding people as many details pass through the attention of aging people.
For instance
, a bus driver in years can just not mention a person walking in the crosswalk and seriously harm his health. Another important point that has to be mentioned is the fact that experienced workers create difficulties for younger ones, which makes finding a job quite tough task.
This
negative trend can be seen in many spheres of life,
however
the
first
one that comes to mind is politics. There was a study that revealed the average
age
of political workers in post Soviet Union countries and according to it the mean
age
is equal to 58,7.
This
not only makes younger generation willing to work in politics unemployed, but
also
does not allow to flow of fresh ideas and innovative approaches to enter some countries. There are a lot of examples that lend credibility to
this
argument and one of them is Kazakhstan, where ruling party and its representatives that have not changed much over the time have been dominating for over a quarter century. To sum up, I again reaffirm my position and consider the idea of people to work after the
age
of 60 a negative one.
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