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some people want government to spend money on life on other planets, however, others think it is a waste of public money when the earth has so many problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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I tend to agree
this
, the current world which we are living most of the countries spending a lot of
money
 on research on other planets to check the possibility of living. Researching on other planets will be useful for the
future
 generation and more over the countries are taking like pride on inventing these kind of things. On the one side most of the people are supporting to spend
money
 on identifying the possibility of human survive on other planets. The main reason for supporting
this
 cause is population. The current statistics, warning in the near
future
, space will be not enough for the human living on the earth. In
this
situation
, most of the governments showing interest in research to check human living possibilities in other planets. But the research needs more
money
 The main reasons for checking ways on other planets are Population increase, not enough resources on the earth for the
future
 generation, increasing technology. Most of the countries taking like pride for their nation when they invent new things and
this
 is most competitive everyone to invent new things.
This
 is the most popular one in the current
situation
 in all the countries. On the other side most of the people are opposed to invest most of the
money
 a planet's inventions because of in the current
situation
 most countries are in crisis. The majority people in all countries are middle class or lower middle class people and they do not get even their daily needs like food, clothes and living space. The people are asking to spend
money
 on these and it will be useful for the several people in the current
situation
. In several countries the people are not eating food even once in a day. But the countries are investing
money
 on an ineffective thing like planets invention. I
finally
 encapsulating
this
 is spending
money
 on other planets are not useful in the current
situation
, but it will be useful for the
future
 generation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • space exploration
  • extraterrestrial
  • terrestrial issues
  • poverty alleviation
  • sustainable
  • philosophical advancement
  • ethics
  • biological diversity
  • technological breakthroughs
  • resource allocation
  • fiscal responsibility
  • humanity's place in the universe
  • pressing issues
  • critical resources
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