There have been many technological developments in the 20th century, for example in transport, telecommunications and health.  What technological development do you think has been the most important? How has it changed people's lives? Have all the changes been positive?

In
20th centuary
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the 20th century
20th century
,
technology
can be taken as a great revolution for humans. Undoubtedly,
technology
has
cahnged
made or become different in nature or form
changed
the landscapes of human
life
to an unimaginable level. Invention of transportation, medical and
telecon
(often plural) systems used in transmitting messages over a distance electronically
telecom
has a great impact on
people
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a person's life
person's life
the person's life
life
. I strongly advocate the approach that
technology
acts as a boon in today's era and
i
of me or myself
my
I
belief it has drawbacks too. I will portray my views in the following paragraphs.
First
and foremost
,
Accept space
,
transport changes lifestyle of masses. Taking you back in
1990's
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the 1990's
prior to, lack of transportation facilities people had to wait
longer
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long
hours to
reached
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reach
their destiny.
However
, in modern era transport embodies the fact that individual approaches towards their destination quickly. The report from
bbc
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BBC
news has
showed
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shown
that
government
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the government
has consistently
devotes
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devoted
a great investment in technological sector just for the betterment of folks. Adding
Further
, Telecommunication plays an inevitable part for everyone
aroung
in the area or vicinity
around
the world.
Communication device
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A communication device
Communication devices
like mobile phone enables an individual to
connected
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connect
with their beloved ones in a quick
second
.
Moreover
, in the same way websites
such
as
facebook
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Facebook
,
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,
whatsapp
and
instagram
allows people to chit-chat 24 hours 7 days a week. Aforementioned statements
fortifies
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fortify
the fact that
technology
acts as a precursor to ease everyone's
life
.
On the contrary
,
technology
has a destructive influence on
masses
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the masses
. Invention of washing machines
lead
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leads
people to get obese as washing machines completely devastated hand work.
For instance
, Aajtak news channel in India has shown that approximately 92.3% of women tends to wash clothes through laundry machines.
Furthermore
, the news has demonstrated that around 62.3% of women are getting thicker with the excessive use of
machines
Accept comma addition
machines, consequently
consequently
,
technology
has an adverse effect too. In conclusion, it cannot be deniable that
technology
enhances the
improvemet
a change for the better; progress in development
improvement
in the
life
of humans.
In contrast
, it puts a detrimental
affects
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effect
effects
on human health.

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