Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

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As the industrial revolution and technology increases, the machines and robots became real and those have been dominating many parts of our life.
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change has several benefits but
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, there are some serious disadvantages. The
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of disadvantage is that mankind's jobs are losing by robots. Most of companies and factories use more machines than hire people; those can work the whole day and more cheaply than a person. In my view, after 50 years, most of career will be destroyed by them.
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, due to increasing the rate of losing jobs,
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average earning money per each person will decrease. Everyone's lives will be harder than a high-tech century.
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, the rate of birth is going to decrease; people do not need to earn money and go outside. So, after 5 decades, maybe the number of mankind will be half than now.
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, the
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benefit is that companies/factories can reduce their money because using them is cheaper, so they will concentrate to make a higher quality and low price things from the factory.
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, in agriculture, the farmers can use them; they can cultivate a lot of crops than before,
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of it, the cost of crops will decrease.
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, we can buy crops in cheaper price.
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, our activities during leisure time will improve
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as games, movies, dramas. We can enjoy our break time more relax even babies, elder citizens and families. In conclusion, the industrial revolution is making our life better,
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there are
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dangers. Please be careful to use them and develop the level of life.

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