In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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and new opportunity are available and that
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can get
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higher
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employees, its
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has believed
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that national society
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a certain level
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to pay
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for paying to their employees. If asked to support, I partially agree with the given statement and that elaborated in
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. Modern development
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has small numbers of people they get an extremely paid for their
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, they can not too much
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rather than the other hard-working
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because of those humans could a perfect time period to
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so some believe that
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is good for our
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and
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growth
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the growth
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economy
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he can give a particular time period to complete his
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, he has to smart
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and get more salary. Those
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types
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such
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as, teacher, manager, accountant and many more.
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, few credits that the governments should make very hard rules for the employees that’s the people cannot stratified with
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law. In that our government has to make a few levels are demonstrate categories of
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and
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paid.
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, an engineer is working on a machinery
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in that he works a lot and its salary is very low that the people not stratified with governments rules and regulations. So, people believe that that’s not perfect for the growing
country
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. To conclude, a hard-working people have not much salaries, while, the small
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or the smart-working people has high paid. In my opinion,
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the government
should change the rule for the
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as well as the employees to get
work
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and
its
the thing named or in question
it
paid.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • incentivize
  • discrepancy
  • inequality
  • social cohesion
  • equitable distribution
  • wealth concentration
  • talent retention
  • global competitiveness
  • social unrest
  • innovate
  • government intervention
  • salary cap
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