In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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present, the new development technology has been admiring to economic for nations. In that the extremely large level of

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and new opportunity are available and that

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can get

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higher

pay for new

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employees, its

good for the

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has believed

is believed

that national society

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gets

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a certain level

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to pay

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, the government

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more restriction on the

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for paying to their employees. If asked to support, I partially agree with the given statement and that elaborated in

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. Modern development

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has small numbers of people they get an extremely paid for their

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rather than the other hard-working

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. The other

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so some believe that

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growth

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the growth

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economy

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with

for

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this

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he can give a particular time period to complete his

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and get more salary. Those

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types

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as, teacher, manager, accountant and many more.

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law. In that our government has to make a few levels are demonstrate categories of

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and

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the thing named or in question

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in that he works a lot and its salary is very low that the people not stratified with governments rules and regulations. So, people believe that that’s not perfect for the growing

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. To conclude, a hard-working people have not much salaries, while, the small

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or the smart-working people has high paid. In my opinion,

government

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the government

should change the rule for the

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as well as the employees to get

work

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and

its

the thing named or in question

paid.

Feb 7, 2020

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Topic Vocabulary:

incentivize
discrepancy
inequality
social cohesion
equitable distribution
wealth concentration
talent retention
global competitiveness
social unrest
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