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Many of today’s most urgent problems can only be solved through international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#today’s #cooperation
In these days, many times countries faced various types of problems that may solve via dialogue with each others. In my opinion, I completely agree with that because cooperation is only a solution that helps us to resolve high priority problems
such
 as contact to beloved one, control
on
Suggestion
of
 health viruses and to arrest a suspicious person.
Firstly
, many families suffered when they are not able to contact with their beloved ones living in the other countries. Sometimes, due to bad weather conditions or failure of communication networks, individuals are not able to communicate with
others
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others, then
then
 the foreign embassies helps people in
this
 regard.
For example
, in the
last
 year, when I was unable to call in Iraq due to excessive weather problems, I asked help from the embassy in Pakistan.
Secondly
, health related viruses recognizing as
the highest
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higher
the high
the higher
 level issues. Corona Virus is spreading around all over the world which originated from the China, sudden steps are required to control it. Many countries are cooperating with China
such
 as by providing medical equipments and by stopping the evacuation of their own citizens immediately.
Moreover
, almost each
country
 faced numerous types of terrorism issues every year. Most of the
terrorist
Suggestion
terrorists
 preferred to leave the
country
 after committing a crime. In
this
 situation, affected state failed to arrest that person, but the
second
country
 can help in
this
such
 as by exchanging the intelligence information. In conclusion, many of the urgent problems can be
resolve
Suggestion
resolved
 by the international cooperation
such
 as by embassies help, mutual decisions and by exchanging valuable information. I suggest the leaders of each
country
 to cooperate with each other in order to better survive.
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