Government should spend more money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

It is generally claimed that railways, which is one of the most used mode of
transpotation
a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods
transportation
,
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,
should be aided by the government in
higher amount
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higher amounts
a higher amount
than that of roads.In my opinion, while l agree that
their
in or at that place
there
are significant reasons, which conform the importance of trains in travelling, I
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
in moving with automobiles
also
crutial
of extreme importance; vital to the resolution of a crisis
crucial
for our
conveniance
the state of being suitable or opportune
convenience
. Undoubtedly, conveying goods and moving from one place to another can be done in vast scale by trains.
This
means that with
large number
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a large number
the large number
of
vagens
any of various kinds of wheeled vehicles drawn by an animal or a tractor
wagons
and travelling boxes in trains
,
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,
many passengers can travel as well as transfer their materials, which are in large portion,
conveniantly
in a convenient manner
conveniently
.
For instance
, in Sri Lanka, fuel
transpotation
a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods
transportation
is mainly done
by
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with
rails in large scale throughout the country.
Furthemore
in addition
Furthermore
, most of the
emplyees
a worker who is hired to perform a job
employees
employee's
employers
use trains as their mode of
transpotation
a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods
transportation
not only for their
comfot
a state of being relaxed and feeling no pain
comfort
but
also
cheapness of the fee compared to
other
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Other
modes On the
otherhand
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other hand
, travelling
in
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on
roads
also
significant in day to day life because it is very common among the people
,
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,
who are
frequanetly
many times at short intervals
frequently
move
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moved
on, in their work.
For instance
, school
children mainly
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children, mainly
use buses and vans to reach schools and come back home.
Furthermore
,
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,
not like trains
,
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,
which work according to a
sheduled
planned or scheduled for some certain time or times
scheduled
time frame, private vehicles can run according to the need of an individual any time as they wish. In conclusion, funding to develop both railways as well as roads by the government is equally essential, as both modes are notably important in
transpotation
a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods
transportation
.
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