Government should spend more money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
It is generally claimed that railways, which is one of the most used mode of
Use synonyms
transpotation
a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods
transportation
,
should be aided by the government in Accept space
,
higher amount
than that of roads.In my opinion, while l agree that Suggestion
higher amounts
a higher amount
their
are significant reasons, which conform the importance of trains in travelling, I in or at that place
there
belive
in moving with automobiles accept as true; take to be true
believe
also
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crutial
for our of extreme importance; vital to the resolution of a crisis
crucial
conveniance
.
Undoubtedly, conveying goods and moving from one place to another can be done in vast scale by trains. the state of being suitable or opportune
convenience
This
means that with Linking Words
large number
of Suggestion
a large number
the large number
vagens
and travelling boxes in trainsany of various kinds of wheeled vehicles drawn by an animal or a tractor
wagons
,
many passengers can travel as well as transfer their materials, which are in large portion, Accept space
,
conveniantly
. in a convenient manner
conveniently
For instance
, in Sri Lanka, fuel Linking Words
Use synonyms
transpotation
is mainly done a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods
transportation
by
rails in large scale throughout the country. Suggestion
with
Furthemore
, most of the in addition
Furthermore
emplyees
use trains as their mode of a worker who is hired to perform a job
employees
employee's
employers
Use synonyms
transpotation
not only for their a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods
transportation
comfot
but a state of being relaxed and feeling no pain
comfort
also
cheapness of the fee compared to
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other
modes
On the Suggestion
Other
otherhand
, travelling Suggestion
other hand
in
roads Suggestion
on
also
significant in day to day life because it is very common among the peopleLinking Words
,
who are Accept space
,
frequanetly
many times at short intervals
frequently
move
on, in their work. Suggestion
moved
For instance
, school Linking Words
children mainly
use buses and vans to reach schools and come back home. Accept comma addition
children, mainly
Furthermore
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,
not like trainsAccept space
,
,
which work according to a Accept space
,
sheduled
time frame, private vehicles can run according to the need of an individual any time as they wish.
In conclusion, funding to develop both railways as well as roads by the government is equally essential, as both modes are notably important in planned or scheduled for some certain time or times
scheduled
Use synonyms
transpotation
.a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods
transportation
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