Many people join distance-learning programmes(study material,post,TV,internet)and study at home,but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending colleges or universities does. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays

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distance

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-learning is being used by many people

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especially after the invention of the

internet

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.But according to some people

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students who are learning in

this

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way

can not

cannot

acquire knowledge properly

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so they think that there

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are

no bright sides.While

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I disagree with

this

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fact and as my understanding doing studies using a

distance

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learning is

benefecial

promoting or enhancing well-being

beneficial

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as learners can save much money.

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studying using

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studying, using

new methods

such

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as either through

internet

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or joining online

coursrs

education imparted in a series of lessons or meetings

courses

would be having the following benefits.

Firstly

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tutors who couldn't find jobs in

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educational

institutions

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institution

created

this

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kind of method teaching students.After that majority of people started joining online

coures

education imparted in a series of lessons or meetings

course

courses

cars

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because of price

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I guess.They don't have to pay the expensive tuition fees

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textbook fees and administration fees for joining college or university.Admittedly

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students can save the commuting expenses and

time

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especially if they travel from

long

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long distances

a long distance

distance

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like countryside

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whereas the college is located in the middle of a city.

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students can join the online courses and take learning as per their convenient

time

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say 1 hour on a daily basis

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of 5 hours on a single day.

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can help them plan the other

time

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of a day

accordingly

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.And most of them are engaged in doing work

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especially who are in a

full-

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full-time, part

time

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part and

can not

cannot

devote

time

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to attend a class physically

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so they can learn whenever they are free.As

abovementioned

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above mentioned

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some of the room learners can not attend to real education

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because of family circumstance.And current study can prove that online learning

also

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has some beneficial sides.The situation was

occured

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occurring

occurred

in one of the villages in Italy.There you could face with a lot of

applicangs

a person who requests or seeks something such as assistance or employment or admission

applicants

with enthusiasm for studying.But almost all of them were from poor backgrounds

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to a very great extent or degree

they couldn't go to educational institutions.Luckily

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government

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the government

provided them with

internet

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acception

a deliberate act of omission

exception

exceptions

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and they started learning online.

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after

few years

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a few years

they had achieved their

sublimintal

functioning in a supporting capacity

supplemental

goals

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even they were taught online.They gained a lot of experience and skills from the tutor.And it gave them

opportunuties

a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances

opportunities

to find a job in their field. To conclude

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learning something online is affordable for poor families

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as they can save their important money and it can give invaluable chance to acquire knowledge about something through the

internet

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distance

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learning is the demand of

future

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the future

because of efficiency and economic value.These facts have persuaded me to feel that

distance

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learning is

better option

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the better option

a better option

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

374 words

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