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Some people think that watching sport is wastage of time during leisure time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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To be vegan or not is always a matter of choice and of course, freedom
to
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of
 choice should be of priority. To be a vegetarian is
good option
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a good option
 so as to be a non-vegetarian. But strictly to be vegetarian is something that we cannot accept as it is.
Hence
this
 essay will be talking about the reasons to disagree
this
 option. Vegetables are always good for health and so a life style without vegetables would have adverse effects on our body.
Although
 non-vegetarian food items
such
 as steaks have a good impact on our diet, it is necessary to have vegetables in our diet.
More over
in addition
Moreover
 including vegetables in our day to day life will helps to collect lots of minerals, proteins and much more essentials with less kilo calories.
Hence for
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Hence, for
 a balanced diet
vegetables
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vegetable
 and non-vegetables should go in hand in hand. The fact that makes vegetables a matter of concern is that it is a source of different immune-boosters and helps resisting various diseases as well as infections.
Deficiency
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A deficiency
 of these necessary components would lead to the collapse of an individual. Considering another aspect of the same, to explore various
food
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foods
 and culture, if we stick on to one stream as a vegetarian the life would be really miserable. If you are opting to be non-vegetarian,
then
 the individual will always have both options and
this
 will really benefit them in all ways. In a scenario where you are trying to learn about a community, the best way for
this
 would be enjoying their festivals and food. Being a vegetarian will definitely restrict you from
this
aspects
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aspect
. In a nutshell, being a non- vegetarian gives you more freedom and flexibility in your lifestyle, and
that is
 something most of the people would like to prefer. Despite of all these above
arguments it
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arguments, it
 is always an individual’s decision to be what and we should respect both.
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