International marketing is sometimes seen as invasive and an intrusion into the country in question. Others argue that it is a necessary and economical form of education in addition to spreading ideas, language, and culture. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Globalization of marketing has already become an inevitable trend of the modern world, so its influence on countries’ lives is clearly seen. Whereas some people find it as threat to a local
businesses
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business
, others feel that international marketing campaigns could be taken as excellent educational and inspirational examples which would be eventually beneficial for a nation. I partly agree with both sides of
this
argument. Worldwide companies spend huge amounts of money on promotion of their products, and, indeed, their marketing strategies are usually very
successful making them
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successful in making them
leaders in sales
on
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in
international markets. Consumers attracted by TV advertisement bright pictures in magazines, and appealing packaging buy their goods forgetting about local brands.
For example
, everybody knows about McDonald’s and people visit these restaurants quite regularly because of continuous reminders about low prices, delicious food, fast service which are brilliant marketing work.
As a result
, smaller restaurants could suffer from
luck
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the lack
the luck
of customers because some
individuals even
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individuals, even
don not know about their existence.
In addition
, businesses with well known names prevent new small companies from development as they do not have enough money to compete with their powerful marketing campaigns.
On the other hand
, healthy
competition
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compete
competing
competes
with marketing giants could bring many advantages because smart entrepreneurs could learn from their experience. Of course, international businesses spend plenty of money on research which aimed at finding out a buyer’s needs and,
thus
, marketing improvement, and these results
cold
requests polite permission
could
be applied to other businesses which cannot afford
such
investigations.
Moreover
, international marketing work as a powerful tool of connection between nations because people could understand and get to know a culture of another country trough products or services which are promoted worldwide.
For instance
, American fast food restaurants
such
as McDonalds or KFC could be found almost in any big city around the world;
thus
their customers could try and feel a traditional North American food and learn some cultural differences. In conclusion, though global businesses could truly interfere with local ones due to their successful marketing actions, I think that the results they show should be taken as good examples for improvement and development of a national marketing.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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