Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern technology is creating a single culture.

Latest technology is bringing everyone on a single platform
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
.e. Connect each other as a single entity. There are several reasons behind
this
singularity
that is
being observed with the current machinery. I agree that current automation has unified the different world cultures.
Firstly
, the current advancement in the machinery has become part and parcel of everyone’s life. All people can connect to each other with the help of current advancement of technology. With the current advancement all people no matter from where and which
culture
they belong to can talk to each other and share their
culture
. They discuss with each other what their
culture
stands for? And How it similar to the other cultures in the world.
For example
, nowadays with the help of social apps
such
as Facebook and Instagram, people of different
culture
talk to each other and share their experience.
Secondly
, these technologies have no rules that each other to connect, as they are neutral in nature. They don’t have any logic and depend on code which does not judge when two people of different
culture
are talking to each other. It does not create any boundary or judge
such
as a human being, who judge each one for what they are and what they meant? Latest innovation has become an excellent medium to unify the world’s
culture
as one and start spreading the message of each
culture
to another
culture
.
For example
, I celebrate and follow my own religion, but with the help of Skype, I was able to make friends in different countries who follow different countries.
This
helps me to understand them and celebrate and share their and my
culture
which brought together. In the end, I would like to conclude that the current advance technology is unifying the world’s
culture
.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global village
  • homogenization
  • cultural exchange
  • erosion
  • standardize
  • cultural powerhouses
  • local traditions
  • globalized culture
  • diversity
  • instantaneous communication
  • economic practices
  • corporate cultures
  • cultural preservation
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