You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you that the college accommodation, where I am currently staying has many problems and
day
by day
it is becoming critical for me to concentrate on my work.
Let me explain to you the situation in detail. Initially
, when I have moved into this
accommodation since I was the first
occupant I did not face any problems. After a few days when a new student has joined to share my room, there the problem has started. My roommate goes to bed late almost every day
and also
he plays loud intolerable music which doesn't allow me to get good sleep. Because of that, the next
day
it is becoming hard for me to concentrate on my work.
I would grateful
if you could change my room. I would prefer to share the room with someone who is more Add a missing verb
be grateful
considerable
about others and Replace the word
considerate
also
understandable.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Sanjay SiramaUnauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite