The maps show the changes of a community center 10 years ago and until the present.

The maps show the changes of a community center 10 years ago and until the present.
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The maps illustrate the developments which have occurred in a civic
center
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centre
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for 10 years. In general, the community
center
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in the present is repurposed than 10 years ago.
According to
the maps, the building had a few structures before it changes
considerately
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. First, to the north of the hall, the toilet has been added, making the storage
room
shrink by half.
Moreover
, there is a disappearance of the garden in the west,
which
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has
then
been replaced by an indoor sports area.
Also
, four office rooms and the storage
room
in the east of the hall have been cleared to make
room
for a coffee area.
Nevertheless
,
while
the working range has been relocated to the original location of the coffee place, the storage
room
has been completely destroyed.
On the other hand
, the 100-seat hall, which is the biggest space, has remained unchanged over the
ten year
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period.
Finally
, the entrance and reception
field
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in the south and the southeast of the building have shown no change.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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