According to a recent study, the more time people use the Internet, the less time they spend with real human beings. Some people say that instead of seeing the Internet as a way of opening up new communication possibilities world- wide, we should be concerned about the effect this is having on social interaction. How far do you agree with this opinion?

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In recent years, many people spend
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, especially teenagers and
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spending less
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with real people. Even though, the
internet
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or technology can help worldwide communicate, but it
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has a negative effect which is effective in our daily life activities.
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, the benefits of the
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about communication are hard to disagree about it. People can talk and connected in a different part of the world. It’s better than past that can use only email or phone which takes
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and hard to reply in real-
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. So, the
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has changed in a better way dramatically. It
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has a lot of applications for chatting
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as Facebook Line MSN or Instagram that created online communities and can share everything in real life. For business, the
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is very important since people have to use the
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to contact suppliers or customers within a
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.
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, the
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has negative impacts on social interaction. People spend most of their
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chatting and watching some news or
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. So, they aren’t interacting with
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a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
or friends in real life. “Human being is a social animal” Aristotle said,
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phrase can prove by now in
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situation, COVID-19. Even though we have
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and can be
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calling, but
it is still not like real humans.
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, those who spend too much
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on the
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are the cause of many syndromes
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as office syndromes and they will lack face to face interaction, which is opposite to what is the human being. In conclusion, I strongly agree with concerned about social interaction.
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the
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indeed has many benefits, we have to concerned about the amount of
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of spending on the
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. It is important to manage and balance
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between online and real humans.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Digital era
  • Social isolation
  • Cyberspace
  • Emotional intelligence
  • Face-to-face communication
  • Global village
  • Virtual reality
  • Remote connections
  • Interpersonal skills
  • Digital divide
  • Cyber-socialization
  • Screen time
  • Online networking
  • Physical disconnection
  • Social dynamics
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